Evolution of a bad OC

This is a very good example of how NOT to make a character.

Background
Star Glade, a human that came from the apocalypse. Star Glade is also a grandmaster survivalist, and he is renowned in his future. Eventually, he made a decision after 10 years of survival. He decided to go to Gensokyo to survive in a manner with less effort. He begins his legacy there, with his team, David, Jesse, Gunny and Sharp.

Power/Combat
Star Glade acts as the commando in his team. He uses assault rifles, sub machine guns, and rocket launchers, especially turrets, however, when he came to Gensokyo, he forgot his weapons, supplies and other items. He tries to learn a new thing, which is part of the setting of Touhou. Where did he get his skill? After 30 years of practice with all the automatic guns, he clearly knows how to deal recoil and mobility. His other skill is driving and manual turrets. Driving isn't really his thing, although he is good at it. His other teammate, Jesse, uses it more than him.

Personality
Star Glade's personality can be mostly serious, and rarely foolish. Since he is a human, he has less mind power than other greater beings, however, he appears to be a successful person, even though he is human.

Spellcards
No spellcards.

Major
Sharp : Sharp is an assassin, which he uses snipers and SMGs (Sub Machine Guns). Star Glade and Sharp seems to be best friends, but in a mean time, he and Sharp gets into fights, which is bad. The team goes back to business in a couple of minutes, which appears to have a conversation over.

Jesse : Jesse is the engineer of the team. He and Jesse doesn't interact alot, because Jesse does alot of engineering in the apocalypse, but now, it changed. Jesse and Star Glade interacts alot about making some weapons and stuff in Gensokyo.

David : David is the support of the team, which means he uses shotguns and pistols. David and Star Glade are regular friends, but been interacting alot in the apocalypse. David and Star Glade does hang out, like killing marauders, zombies and guardians. They both are like best friends.

Gunny : Gunny is a big man. He is the one that uses dual vulcan chain guns and other heavy weapons. Gunny and Star Glade doesn't get along, as Gunny has a decent behavior. Sometimes, Gunny can talk, but not always.

Background
Star Glade is the aspect of life. He mainly studies religion, which is roman. Of course, he is a roman. He is a 40 year old priest who tries to stay pure. There, he makes everything clean in his style. Also, he is known as "Prince Star Glade", outing the fact that the first nickname shows that he is like a prince to the church, or is the main priest of the church.

Power/Combat
He is a half fighter, half priest hybrid. These are the combat skills listed below :

Life Magic: His life magic is considered weak. Star Glade's life magic isn't meant for fighting, he uses it for healing, and a lot more. His healing, is limited. The healing energy only comes after 2 minutes, so that means he can't heal until the 2 minutes are done.

Holy Magic: He knows holy magic. The holy magic of his is used for fighting dark creatures. That's because holy magic is really effective against dark creatures. He can just holy blast his opponents, Divine Surge his enemies, then finish them off with the Avenging Wrath, which shoots 2 holy fires at the enemy, making a large explosive.

Chinese Martial Arts: He uses martial arts, however, he isn't that skilled at martial arts. He is about average.

Swordfighting: He is pretty skilled at swordfighting, and often uses it in combat. He uses different katanas in his choice, for he crafted and forged each katana. He has a jade katana, and a silver katana, for example.

Different Kinds of Orbs: He uses orbs in combat. Simple, he holds an orb in combat, then use its effect. For example, Star Glade has a Blink Orb, which teleports behind the enemy, and stabs the enemy with his katana.

Personality
Star Glade's personality is serious while talking to great beings. Sometimes, he can mess up and act foolish, or mostly, I should say.

Spellcards
No spellcards.

Major
Nimbo: Nimbo is a ninja, who is an expert at ninja skills. Star Glade is serious in life, and Nimbo kids around since he is 15. These different personalities give a bad effect, meaning that they don't hang out that much, but somehow, they are still best friends.

Background
Born in the year of 1982, Zane Reuter was a fine child, until then, his dad got killed by a murderer in the Human Village. His mom took care of him, but he didn't like it. His mom was extremely strict and mean, making him feel miserable. He didn't accept the consequences when his dad died. He disliked the bad thing that happened. He beat up his mom, even though he is still 11, then he ran off.

He still felt his misery. Therefore, he was a bad child. He decided to hide in places, and beat up people for their money and other major things he needed. As he grows up, he has been studying fighting for the past years. That is included with his hunger; he uses the yen obtained from people and then buys the food. As he became 16, he was a bad human that likes to pick on people.

He has met a friend in his life. His name is Lancelot. He is a 14 year old that likes to be annoying to Zane. Zane did not like it. Therefore, he used his katana and stabbed him through his heart. As he tries to find a friend to talk to, he only found one that is a great person to him. His name is Elroy. Elroy is a 15 year old that respects Zane as well. Zane decided to be friends with him by then.

When Zane was 25, he did crimes that were bad. Zane took out his katana, and kept on stabbing people through their heart for their money and other stuff. Zane became evil that time as well.

Power/Combat
His combat is swordfighting and tactics.

He isn't that good at swordfighting, but he tries to be good at it. As he functions his body, he at least tries his best to fight his enemy that he hates. His combat is pretty weak, but his tactics are strong. He could hide in a bush and ambush his enemy, or either beat up his enemy with his fist and katana. The combat of Zane, was gifted delightfully.

Personality
Zane's personality is mostly evil, frustrated, furious, rude, and unpleasant.

Zane gets annoyed really easily. When something seems wrong for him, or he is uncomfortable, he talks and yells back to the person in a very bad manner, then kills the following person. He is evil, also. When he is doing bad stuff he should not be doing, he does it with great effort. Once then, Zane can offend people most of the time. He seems to be very obnoxious to everyone. That means, he, a deadly human, speaks to people like, "Go f*** yourselves".

In combat, he gets very serious when he fights. He mostly fights the people that he dislikes. Therefore, he puts them in combat with him. He fights other humans other than great beings like Youkai.

Spellcards
No spellcards.

Major
Elroy: Elroy and Zane does not interact that much, but they are still the important figures between them two. By the time Elroy speaks, Zane walks away peacefully. Zane DOES get upset with Elroy, but he does not show his mood somehow. Zane has better things to do indeed.

Background
Born in the year of 1982, Zane Reuter is one of the children that wants to become a real fighter. His dad is a real fighter, then Zane wanted to become like him. He was signed up for the Border of Defense Academy when he was 14 years old. Zane seemed to learn fast when he was training with training dummies. That was his first lesson by then. He learned a couple of strategies when he had his second lesson, which is when you fight real people. His swordsmanship level was high, so then, he continued on to lesson 3. On lesson 3, he didn't do well. He tried to do a mission, but his leadership appeared to be poor. After he failed his lesson, he continued on and read booabout having great leadership. After that, he retries his lesson, and then he passed. Yes, lesson 3 is to do a simple task, because that is part of the Border of Defense test. He has joined the Border of Defense when he completed 3 lessons.

Elroy, an intelligent student from high school, met Zane in the Human Village. After Zane and Elroy had a conversation about themselves, they have taken off and resume their normal lives.

Zane decided to duel other real sword fighters, when he was 22. He has been studying hard on reading guides to succeed in sword fighting. Therefore, he won all of his matches. He has obtained unique-kind trophies from the matches. His matches were hard, so he focused on his mission. When he got home, his mom and dad died, but not Matthew Reuter. Matthew Reuter is Zane's older brother, and when Matthew dueled Zane in a fight, Zane lost as well. Zane has received his first lose in real matches, that day.

Zane kept on reading books about succeeding in sword fights. He has read for 1 year, so far, then he became 23. He kept practicing his reflexes, and the strength for his future life. Zane has challenged Matthew again, and Zane won. Matthew had accepted defeat, and became champion. Later that day, Zane entered a tournament in a zone. Zane has defeated all of his opponents, but not the finals. Before, Matthew declared a rematch with him, so he joined the tournament too. Without Zane noticing Matthew coming, he has then fought Matthew. Zane won, and Zane became a champion of the tournament.

When Zane was 29, he met Elroy again. Zane then asked his name, and they started to become great friends. They have worked with each other to gain yen by becoming good merchants. They know what they are doing.

Zane is a good swordfighter, and he earns yen in bets of sword fighting. He has proven he is a great swordfighter, but not stronger than greater beings.

Power/Combat
His combat is sword fighting, included with his reflexes, strength, and a quick thinking mind.

Zane's swordfighting is good, but there will always be someone better than him. Like for example, Youmu Konpaku and Yorihime Watatsuki. They are alot better than Zane. His reflexes, he attacks the enemy really fast, and can block attacks fast too. His strength, is used to kill enemies quicker. And for last, his witty mind, helping him succeed in battles. That is his combat.

He also knows karate. He is good at it for a human. Also, this is his main skill. He does swordfighting a little bit now.

Personality
Zane's personality is mostly serious.

Zane has been doing well in his life, and that means he is serious. His focus is well, his brain is strong, and his body is strong. He has accomplished these workouts that he did, so that means he really is serious. As he keeps focusing on his life, he succeeded even more, which means he didn't stop being serious. This is the good side of Zane.

Spellcards
No spellcards.

Major
Elroy: Elroy and Zane are business partners. They try to earn as much yen as possible, and they have succeeded. Their mission is to get 10 million yen, but they are still working on it. They will be best friends and business partners, for a long time.